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I hope someone would like to download my first ever track! I think it turned out quite good but I wish I could get someone else's feedback on it!

Download the MP3 here:
http://www.dynaweb.no/djtnt/Invincible/DJ%20TNT%20-%20Invincible%20(Original%20Mix).mp3

Enjoy!
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It's a really nice tune, but the vocals seem to stick out in places, esp. at the beginning, also try & make it less than 320kbps, do it in 128 or 160, it will sound ok but more modem users will be able to get it... so far 6.5/10
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Cool, thanks a lot for the tips and the rating! Very Happy

Do you think I should maybe make the vocals less high pitched in the beginnning so they sound more like they do later in the track? And make the vocals go with the music more seamlessly...? I'll try that and also I'll repost it in 160kbps for those of you with modem or ISDN connections Smile
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Wink I edited the song (played around with the vocal samples a little trying to make it better), and uploaded it in 160kbit to this address:

http://www.dynaweb.no/djtnt/Invincible/DJ%20TNT%20-%20Invincible%20(160kbit).mp3

Hope you can listen through it and give me some more feedback, thanks! Smile Cool
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This is really good, what did you make it on, also theres a rank1 style their, Like the bass and beat...
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I also noticed you added vinyl static in the backround, very good.
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Thank you!

Actually I used an unknown A.I.D.A. tune as the base melody and added to it (also including adding vocals) and edited it all with Sound Forge 5 and Acid Pro 3 from Sonic Foundry. I am very happy with the results myself and I plan to continue making tunes because I really learned a lot from this project Very Happy
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What sequencer did you make your tune on, Cubase, Logic, Fruityloops...?
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I used Acid and Sound Forge, no sequencer this time, but it took a lot of time and timing to use these applications only and get things right. I'm looking into Fruityloops and other applications now for my future projects.
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For a first effort it's really good, nice to see so many good new producers on here Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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D/ling now, will be back with comments soon...... Wink

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For a first track its very impressive. A little messy here and there but a great track on the whole. Wink

Nice work....keep it up..... Very Happy

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Thank you very much everybody for listening through it and giving me great feedback!!! Really appreciated!
Laughing Cool Wink
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nice track, especially for your first attempt Smile
really rank 1-ish as well... the soft bass etc

great work Smile

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