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Massive
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Post subject: Hi check mine tune out please |
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been working with fruityloops for 2 months and this is mine first production you mite hear some errors but to be a pro you got to be an ametuer
http://www.clanwiet.com/downloads/Massive.zip
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 7:16 pm |
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Viceroy Sam Club Franchise Owner
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Not bad. I like the melody, but the same one is repeated over and over near the end of the track. Small variations in the melody, for example bringing it down on octave or simply progressing the melody a bit would work better, in my opinion. Also, a longer period of the melody would be nicer, if it was variated. Most of the song is the pre-melody build up, but you could cut some of that out for the rest of the track.
My opinion, of course.
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 4:44 pm |
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Massive
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Viceroy wrote: | Not bad. I like the melody, but the same one is repeated over and over near the end of the track. Small variations in the melody, for example bringing it down on octave or simply progressing the melody a bit would work better, in my opinion. Also, a longer period of the melody would be nicer, if it was variated. Most of the song is the pre-melody build up, but you could cut some of that out for the rest of the track.
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i know that but it was mine first 1, mine second 1 which will come up soon which is much better
tnx for the reply
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 12:50 pm |
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