Ryan - Regnskog (Opeara Version) "192kbit" full!

Ryan · **Posted:** Mon Aug 08, 2005 8:17 pm

Hi!

This is something new I have made. I make music everyday! hehe..
I realy want some feedback on this one! I feel that I miss something in this tune, but someone tells me its perfect like it is & that I dont do anything with it. So I need your help now!

It is opera I have made by my self! So its not so good yet!

Here is the direct link Wink

http://jkjk.tronder.net/mp3/Ryan%20-%20Regnskog%20(Opeara%20Version).mp3

Ryan

Stream · **Posted:** Tue Aug 09, 2005 7:05 am

I must say this one starts very well and continues in the same manner. Good work indeed!

Improvements can of course always be made but I don't feel it's necessary in this case.

Who's the vocalist btw?

Have you sent it to any labels?

Ryan · **Posted:** Tue Aug 09, 2005 10:45 am

Hi stream! thanks for the great review:)

The vocalist is someone I know.

Well. I have not tryed to sent it to a label. You know any good labels to send it to?

And if I want to make somechanges. what you think need to be improved? If this song shuld get even better!

Thanks!

Ryan

Viceroy · **Posted:** Wed Aug 24, 2005 6:21 pm

The subtle melodic hints in the very beginning of the intro are well placed I think. Most producers wait before introducing them, but this works in your track.
The main synth stabs after the intro seem a little off, a little too penetrating. Perhaps you could "smooth them down" a little bit?
I think I hear what you mean when you say it is missing something. It just seems a little empty once the vocal is introduced - I'm not sure why, that's how it sounds to me.

dxsire · **Posted:** Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:04 pm

You know what...I LOVE the track, but i think I know what's missing. You need some...well I have no idea what the term is...but like a wave of synth playing throughout. I think I might hear inklings of one, but if you can tone that up, and maybe add another drum beat somewhere in there towards the end of the track. I think then it would be AMAZING.

I really did like it just as it was, I just figured I'd try to help!

Great track

Ryan · **Posted:** Sat Sep 17, 2005 5:14 pm

okey!! Thanks... unfortenlty I have stoped to make music for a while now.. so I will not come with very big hit tracks at the moment.

but nothing makes me more happy, that people like what i like Wink

thanks for all the suport for now!

bigdave · **Posted:** Fri Oct 28, 2005 8:11 am

Ryan . . . why o why stop making music! I really enjoyed this track, and to be honest you dont need to alter it that much, just tweek the synths a little, well done to you . . . . I will be watching out for your future work . . . You might want to send it into the links I have listed below, a few worthy producers that would certainly give it the time of day... goood luccckkk mate.

www.liveandloud.tv
www.djgenix.co.uk
www.djjfk.co.uk

Ryan · **Posted:** Sat Dec 03, 2005 9:37 pm

thanks you so much bigdave. Surprised

Yeah. Maybe I will send it to one of the producers!

So!

Thanks for all the suport again!