My new hard trance tune

t3kheavenscry · **Posted:** Sun Feb 26, 2006 2:20 pm

http://www.internetdj.com/artists.php?op=viewsongreviews&mediaid=26771

hard trance, nice thumping kick nice breakdown and uplifin pads and awesome melody i think.

let me know what you tihnk, andm ore importantly, all your negative stuff about this song, need people to tell me what could be better rather than whats good but lot of both will do.

djpj · **Posted:** Tue Feb 28, 2006 5:33 pm

I really like this one!

The break is great! Very nice melody!

Maybe it would be nice to add a thin, airy string or pad sound at the point the climax starts (3.14)? This would make it sound more exciting I think.

t3kheavenscry · **Posted:** Tue Feb 28, 2006 6:17 pm

taking that into account mate along with other reviews iv had, thanks alot

Aquascape · **Posted:** Fri Mar 24, 2006 8:33 pm

This is all right and definitely has potential. You should work on your buildups and fills more - it's not just about snare and kick rolls. Automate your synths' LFOs and filters more to give the track more movement, it's a bit static. That cheesy Alice Deejay-esque sound doesn't really have a place in a hard trance tune - you should substitute that patch for something a bit edgier. The melody it plays also isn't terribly inspired, so I'd change that too. The bassline could be made more interesting, if you're going to keep that simple offbeat pattern you should definitely layer it, or perhaps double the notes up, like Alphazone do.

A good work in progress though, hope I wasn't too critical, but you said you wanted negative stuff as well as positive Smile