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Lightworks Wim Ruling the Dancefloor
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Hey everyone
I've spent the whole friday updating the track, adding more pump to the bass and editing the ending of the track as well, so that it becoems alot more dj friendly
Here's the direct url to it :
lightworks - fahrenheit (original mix)
I think this is gonna be the final mix of the track, since I've grown pretty tired of hearing it by now hehe But you can always let me know what you think of this updated version, whether you think it's an improvement or not.
Take care!
LW _________________ Icone / Van Gelder / Blue Manta / The Elemental
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It's a quality track. I think the synth that comes in at 1:37 should be 'warmer'. It sounds shrill. I love the strings, good job. The main synth is very good and phatt
Another fine production Keep it coming. _________________ 1. Greed - Strange World (Lemon 8 Remix)
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Lightworks Wim Ruling the Dancefloor
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thx for your comments
i'll be seeign what i can do for the final version, this one's a temporary upload
thx again, see you later
Wim @ LW _________________ Icone / Van Gelder / Blue Manta / The Elemental
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Mathew
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i thought it was pritty decent... maybe make the bass a bit higher cuz it seemed a bit flat to - but thats my opinion...
keep up the good work... |
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Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2002 6:35 pm |
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Lightworks Wim Ruling the Dancefloor
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hey thx
you mean like leveling up the volume? or what did you mean by 'higher'?
cheers _________________ Icone / Van Gelder / Blue Manta / The Elemental
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deeper.. if u know what i mean ?? |
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Lightworks Wim Ruling the Dancefloor
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tRANCEMASTER wrote: | deeper.. if u know what i mean ?? |
i'll try to fix it
thx for the help! _________________ Icone / Van Gelder / Blue Manta / The Elemental
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wooooooooo.... wicked tune fella i love it... them synths are amazing...
.. i think trancemasters right.. the bass could do with a lift.. make it more BOOM BOOM BOOM.. as its hard trance... and 138 is a little slow for H/Trance too... try it @ 146..
hehe.. make sure u tell us when final versions done _________________
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Lightworks Wim Ruling the Dancefloor
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thx buddy
you mean the kicks then? hehe i thought trancemaster meant the bass... well i think my pc maybe auto-boosts those basses i dunno. i think maybe 146 will be too fast though for this one, as most of the beauty of the main synth will be lost... i'll make it 140 or so.
i'll see if i can add a harder one in the final version of the track... if it works well that is.
thx again for your thought
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sorry lightworks, i did mean the kicks... and 138 is fine - but of course a dj spinning hard-trance would be playing tunes faster, so it doesn't matter...
top tune again btw !! |
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Lightworks wrote: | i think maybe 146 will be too fast though for this one, as most of the beauty of the main synth will be lost... i'll make it 140 or so.
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hehe.. your prob right... 140 would work.. it will just make the beats go that little faster
... but as tRANCEMASTER said.. a hrad trance dj would prob play it alot faster anyway.. _________________
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great track lightworks
just the style i like
and great synths u got going on 8) _________________
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tRANCEMASTER wrote: | sorry lightworks, i did mean the kicks... and 138 is fine - but of course a dj spinning hard-trance would be playing tunes faster, so it doesn't matter...
top tune again btw !! |
thx
i'm glad you like it! i did my best with the synths and all... just wanted it to sound just right. i guess a pitch can do, but this is easily altered... even when you're not altering the whole track at once
Cheers!
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I just wanted to say I am sorry. I am sorry that i just dont like your track. It is all my fault that i didnt like your tune. Now i hope you forgive me and not talk about it anymore. _________________ Signature removed by Admin, user BANNED (I said no, DJMiro, you pushed mine and everybode else's patience over the edge)! |
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Lightworks Wim Ruling the Dancefloor
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it's totally alright to dislike a track, not everyone's taste is the same. just try to think a little more before you post some bad talk or agressive comments... people don't tend to like it, and you won't gain in popularity by it... at least not in the positive sense _________________ Icone / Van Gelder / Blue Manta / The Elemental
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And still your track suck!!! _________________ Signature removed by Admin, user BANNED (I said no, DJMiro, you pushed mine and everybode else's patience over the edge)! |
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DJMiro wrote: | And still your track suck!!! |
Just shut up... _________________ 1. Greed - Strange World (Lemon 8 Remix)
2. 16B - Keep On Changing Shape
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It sounds gret mate !! I like the start..that synth coming in sound realy, really, really great...was that made with a JP8000 ? The kicks is nice...the bass sounds good and the percussion is done well. I like the synth stabs coming in at 1:50..really nice...I like the layers u use at the breakdown at about 3:00 sounds really great...ahh that synth is coming again I just think that u should've made it a touch louder...the drums sorta drains it out...Hell..I really love this track mate
You should really send this to ID&T or Purple Eye....great work man..thumbs up !!!
OH yeah, if u're looking for a remix e-mail me at djrebirth@myrealbox.com _________________ ReBirth // Pienaar & Bamford // P.H.A.T.T. |
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DJMiro wrote: | And still your track suck!!! |
That was really low class and common of u mate....uncalled for. Can u do any better ?
I fink the track rocked !!!
Oh yeah, I play my Hard Trance sets at 143 BPM's so..it wouldn't make such a big difference _________________ ReBirth // Pienaar & Bamford // P.H.A.T.T. |
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Lightworks Wim Ruling the Dancefloor
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hey thx alot ReBirth
I'm glad you like it (unlike some other fancy users )! Well, I made the synth with VAZ, a nice software little thingy It's quite altered though in Fruityloops 3.40 since the synth were quite raw-sounding just coming out of VAZ. But now they fit well I think
If you want to remix, what would you be needing? I have the flp file... Midi won't work since my fruityloops resists on exporting it that way
Cheers! thx again for having a look
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DJMiro wrote: | And still your track suck!!! |
LOL! sure someone is stubborn around here _________________ Icone / Van Gelder / Blue Manta / The Elemental
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Lightworks wrote: | DJMiro wrote: | And still your track suck!!! |
LOL! sure someone is stubborn around here |
he aint stubborn.. hes just a n0b _________________
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finally getting round to downlaoding your tune, i'll let you know my coments
djmiro wrote: | And still your track suck!!! |
you've already made your opinon, clear, now what exactly, whats the point of that, if you dont like a track, thats fine, but useless remarks aren't gona get you anywhere _________________ Lost as in a dream
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maybe some more variation in synths would be great. Use Fruityloops for instance and some fine software modular synths to pump the song a bit up ! more energetic ! _________________ Gsus is a Trancy state of mind |
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Lightworks Wim Ruling the Dancefloor
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gsus2002 wrote: | maybe some more variation in synths would be great. Use Fruityloops for instance and some fine software modular synths to pump the song a bit up ! more energetic ! |
hehe that's exactly what i did though _________________ Icone / Van Gelder / Blue Manta / The Elemental
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Lightworks Wim Ruling the Dancefloor
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Hey Ami
so what did you think of the track when you got it?
let me know... i'm always in for some honest comments
cheers!
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hey, sorry, for taking a while to post
ive had a run thro your music, several times, and 1st impression is a nice track , i quite like it
the starting of the track reminded me of unreal, the computer game, the vast sweeping synth sounds,
then you got the build up, and here you get the bass, which i feel is kinda "wide" not punchy enough, thats been said already, plus its probably gonna be due to the mp3 being 128 as well, i can see where this is getting as to "hard trance" but its not quite there, you probbaly meant it this way, as not full on hard trance, but rather it having elements of hard trance in it"
there is nice variation, and flow to the track considering its an 8 min odd track , the synth work is pretty amazing,
overall to sum it up its a pretty nice track, i believe its a pretty good way as to show your skills, in making music
nice one, and who knows what other good stuff you'll produce in the future as you get better and better, _________________ Lost as in a dream
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Abandoning Friends,
Abandoning Humanity,
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